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August 16, 2013
Lodstone/Magnetite - Sorcerer and Golem by *LucasParolin
Featured by Thiefoworld
Suggested by Valentina-Remenar
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Lodstone/Magnetite - Sorcerer and Golem

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Lodstone Golem and Sorcerer

This is my entry for the contest Bloodsports 15 - Guild of Golems
If you wanna know more about bloodsports read it here crimsondaggerblood.blogspot.co…

If you wanna check the process on creating this image, I have all my studies on my blog www.lucasparolin.com/
In these three post to be more precise
www.lucasparolin.com/2013/04/b…
www.lucasparolin.com/2013/04/l…
www.lucasparolin.com/2013/04/b…

Character concept


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Thank you very much Valentina, for suggesting my piece for a DD, never got a DD before, this was very kind of you!

I was traveling in vacations and that's why took me so long to acknowledge what happened.

Thanks Thiefworld for featuring it! And also thank you all for the love from the community
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hi & here we go, you get a critique from non professional <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I'm really fascinated from this one.
You hit a lot of lovely details in this picture, like rocks, depth with "smoke" and a nice color balance, which creates a fine atmosphere.

I have to admit, that i'm a little bit confused with the focal point.
The perspective looks (for me!!) a little bit weird.
I don't know if it's my mind who tricks me here, but this is the only critical point in a slightly negative way.

Just to explain my thoughts:
The Mage is behind the liquids and his scale is very big.
Also the tiny rocks are before the liquids. The range of both shown objects is for me really hard to figure out. Maybe it would help to add a scale object, to get more informations out from the whole objects in here.

As i said, this is the only thing what makes me say "Hhmm?"
The rest is very well and absolutly perfect for me.
Imo you have chosen the right colors here and put them well in scene !
I definitly one of the works who let me look longer than normal on it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Hope this is usefull to you.